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Old 02-28-2004, 07:45 AM   #1 (permalink)
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If I Only Could!

WRITE!


As it lifted off the water, thousand beads of water rolled off it's white satin neck and as it rose higher into the air on silent wings, the morning rays of sun filtered through the evergreen trees causing the drops of water to look like thousands of diamonds tumbling back to the water in a kaleidoscope of colors. Just a moment in time and then it was gone.

Wrote this in high school for English as a desriptive paragraph. Voted the best in English glass in the entire high school.

It was a swan I saw rising from a marsh one early morning while out exploring and I was a freshman in high school.
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Old 02-28-2004, 07:51 AM   #2 (permalink)
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that was awesome johnny.im sure evryone else will like it too good job bud your a poet and dont know it.lol.
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ask all the questions you have if we cant answer it we'll make up some thing. remember patience is the key to a kick ass reef.

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Old 02-28-2004, 05:06 PM   #3 (permalink)
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If I could only write like that...I would be rich! Because Johnny! I would write a book and see if I could find someone who would be interested in publishing it!

That is so beautiful!
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Old 02-28-2004, 05:48 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Your mind is a raging torrent, flooded with rivulets of thought, cascading into a waterfall of creative alternatives.

no, wait,

your mind is a-glow with whirling transient nodes of thought, careening through a cosmic vapor of invention.

yeah, that's better.

gina, it isn't necessarily how you write. One must have the ideas and stories too. Floral prose is wasted if there's nothing holding it up. (not saying Johnny's writing isn't good just stating that it is hard as hell to write a book, let alone a book that someone other than friends and family will read).

Gina, the molten yellow ball of fire slowly melted into the horizon. Rivulets of red and magenta reflected off the water's surface and all at once I was at peace.


Easy to sound good, hard to have substance. Take it from a failed writer.
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Now Crakeur you should be a writer really!
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Old 02-28-2004, 05:53 PM   #6 (permalink)
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bleh. I've tried.

seems the world isn't ready for my gibberish.
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Old 02-28-2004, 05:55 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Quote:
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Easy to sound good, hard to have substance. Take it from a failed writer.
agreed, and Gina, he's right.

btw, his stuff is good, really good. (so was yours Johnny)
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Old 02-28-2004, 05:57 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Johnny, I didn't intend to derail or knock the writing. I love when I come across old things that make me think.

Yours was real good.
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Like I said, If Only I Could Write!
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maybe you both should get together and write a book.lol.i liked them both.good job guys.
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Johnny the literary master? Hmmm
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Oh man hell has truely frozen over, rofl


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LOL, Mike...did you see that pig fly by?


Johnny, that was very nice - thanks for sharing!
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