| Your mind is a raging torrent, flooded with rivulets of thought, cascading into a waterfall of creative alternatives.
no, wait,
your mind is a-glow with whirling transient nodes of thought, careening through a cosmic vapor of invention.
yeah, that's better.
gina, it isn't necessarily how you write. One must have the ideas and stories too. Floral prose is wasted if there's nothing holding it up. (not saying Johnny's writing isn't good just stating that it is hard as hell to write a book, let alone a book that someone other than friends and family will read).
Gina, the molten yellow ball of fire slowly melted into the horizon. Rivulets of red and magenta reflected off the water's surface and all at once I was at peace.
Easy to sound good, hard to have substance. Take it from a failed writer.
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It's not the size of the nose that matters, it's what's inside that counts!
If I wanted a joke, I'd follow you into the john and watch you take a leak.
You know when you're telling these little stories? Here's a good idea: have a point. It makes it so much more interesting for the listener!
Women have choices, and men have responsibilities
Last edited by Crakeur : 02-28-2004 at 06:52 PM.
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